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HOME
Objective:
None - the goal of this page is to attract students into the lesson.
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Haiku is an ancient yet timeless form of Japanese poetry.
Some of you may be completely unfamiliar with the term whereas some of you
have already composed haiku. Most of you fall somewhere in between these
two extremes. Take a few moments to write down everything you know about
haiku. If you can, try to compose one right now. You will soon email
your thoughts to me. At the end of the lesson we will re-examine these thoughts
and see how our understandings of haiku have changed. Students are then told
why it is important to study haiku and what the lesson will involve. Students
are then told to move on to "how to navigate the lesson." For students
new to the WWW a brief explanation of what a link is/how links work is provided. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Haiku Page,
Student Email, Teacher Email)
- 2 bottom navigation links (Home, Next - "Next" button linked to navigational
instruction page)
- Links to web design pages (bio, concept map, design doc, flowchart,
storyboards)
- Link to graphics free printable site
- Link to How to Navigate the Haiku Lesson Site
- Email link to lesson designer
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- Table with 2 colored ink paintings of haiku and kanji symbol for "haiku"
- b/w graphic of old man with Basho's famous frog poem over top
- decorative Next button and Home button (kanji symbols)
- table with web design links
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PILOT
Objective:
None - the goal of this page is to prepare students to navigate the lesson.
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Navigational tools used in the lesson are identified
and described in table format - defines the 6 main links and the 3 bottom
links that appear on all the lesson pages and the web design links that appear
on the home page. The page also includes a link to HOTMAIL with a brief
explanation so students who need an account can open one and a brief explanation
about the Japanese Kanji symbols used in the navigation. Finally, students
are encouraged to contact me if they have questions or problems then told
to move on with the lesson. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 3 bottom navigation links (Back, Home, Next - "Next" button linked
to History of Haiku,
- "Back" button linked to home page)
- Links to web design (bio, concept map, design doc, flowchart, storyboards)
- Email link to my email address
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- Asian boat (symbolizing navigating)
- Japanese brush (symbolizing students are about to write/do something)
- 3 tables (my creation) with link symbols and descriptions
- b/w haiku ink painting
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HISTORY
Objective
None - the goal of this page is to set the tone and give background on the
poetic form.
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How haiku came into being as a form of poetry in it's own right. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 3 bottom navigation links (Back, Home, Next - "Next" button linked
to elements page, "Back" button linked to navigation page)
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- Bonsai tree (symbolizing age or the passing of time)
- Samurai faces (reinforcing the Japanese origination of haiku)
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ELEMENTS
Objective
None - the goal of this page is simply to introduce the elements and set
up this section of the lesson.
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What makes a haiku a haiku? This page lists the elements that will be
studied in this lesson, both in bulleted form and as a graphic organizer. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 3 bottom navigation links (Back, Home, Next - "Next" button linked
to syllabication page, "Back" button linked to history page)
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- Cherry blossom (traditional kigo)
- Small cherry blossoms as bullets
- Graphic organizer of haiku elements (my creation)
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SYLLABLE
Objectives:
1.1 Upon reading four haiku the student will determine if the haiku
follow traditional syllabication form by identifying the following three aspects:
1) is it 17 syllables in all, 2) is it in three lines, and 3) are the lines
broken into a 5/7/5 pattern, with 100% accuracy.
1.2 After completing the practice, the students will introduce
themselves to the class by composing three lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables
that tells about themselves.
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Beginning with a statement that haiku consist of only seventeen syllables
students are given the option of going to a syllabication review. Students
are told why this form was used then given practice at identifying correctly
syllabicated haiku. After the practice, students are asked to compose a three
line introduction poem that follows the correct syllabication pattern and
post it to a threaded discussion. For students unfamiliar with threaded discussions
groups a brief "how to post" guide is provided. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 3 bottom navigation links (Back, Home, Next - "Next" button linked
to kigo page, "Back" button linked to elements page)
- Link to syllable review
- Link to Threaded discussion group
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- Cherry blossom (traditional kigo)
- Fude brush (symbolizing students are about to write/do something)
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SYLLABLE REVIEW
Objective:
None: the goal of this page is to remind students what a syllable is
and to give practice in determining how many syllables are in a word.
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"Syllables cause the rhythm and flow in poetry. Poets
select words not only for their meanings but for their syllabication pattern
so that they can control the rhythm in the poem. A syllable is a single spoken
sound that forms a word or a part of a word. Children often practice counting
syllables by clapping each beat of the word in question." I then give some
examples of words broken into syllables and have a self check quiz on counting
syllables. Students are told to refer to the dictionary if they are ever
in doubt and to return to the syllable lesson. |
- Link back to syllable review
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
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KIGO
Objectives:
2.1 Upon reading a sentence or haiku containing a season word students
will identify what season is represented.
2.2 For each of the four seasons students will compose a list of
5 kigo they associate with that season.
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The word "kigo" is introduced and defined and the importance of a seasonal
reference is discussed. An example of brainstorming autumn kigo is provided
as well as the warning that kigo can be location dependent and culturally
dependent. Students practice identifying seasonal references with a self-check
exercise in naming the season represented by a sentence or haiku then they
are asked to compile a list of kigo they associate with each season and post
this list to a threaded discussion group. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 3 bottom navigation links (Back, Home, Next - "Next" button linked
to imagery page, "Back" button linked to syllabication page)
- Link to sample concept map for Autumn Kigo (my creation)
- Links to four printable blank concept map worksheets, one for each
season (my creation)
- Link to Threaded discussion group
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- Cherry blossom (traditional kigo)
- Fude brush (symbolizing students are about to write/do something)
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SAMPLE AUTUMN MAP
Objective:
None - the goal of this page is simply to serve as an example of Fall kigo
so that students can use it as a guide to create their own lists.
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No text, just a concept map for Autumn grouping words I associate with
that season. |
- Link back to the Kigo lesson
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
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- The map itself is a graphic (a .jpg) but it also contains a picture
of a fall leaf
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AUTUMN, WINTER, SPRING, & SUMMER
Objective:
None - the goal of these pages is to assist students who may be having trouble
creating a list of kigo for each season by providing major category headings
and a format for brainstorming.
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No real text, just a title, a concept map with blanks to fill in the
headings for "animals", "plants", "activities", "holidays", "foods", "sports",
and "misc" and the name of the season in the middle. |
- 5 links - back to kigo and one for each blank season concept map
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
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The center of each concept map contains an image:
- Autumn - leaf,
- Winter - snowflake,
- Spring - flowers,
- Summer - sun
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IMAGERY
Objective:
None as yet! Still debating.
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"The brevity of haiku makes good use of imagery vital.
In order to convey meaning, emotion, and a "moment in time" in so few syllables
you must make every syllable count. Another description of haiku is a poem
that describes a moment of clarity, where some circumstance or image
has so touched a person that they must stop and compose this poem. For this
reason you must develop the "haiku eyes" mentioned in the introduction and
look at the world clearly, examine things more closely. For example, use
specific words - instead of "flower" use the name of the flower. Also, try
not to explain what you saw but to show it through the images you use. Give
the reader the suggestion and let them complete the picture based on the
pictures your words create." Simple "do's" and "don'ts" are provided, along
with examples. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 3 bottom navigation links (Back, Home, Next - "Next" button linked
to secondary page, "Back" button linked to kigo page)
- Link to Literary Devices definition page
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- Cherry blossom (traditional kigo)
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LITERARY DEVICES
Objective:
None - the goal of these pages is to assist students who might not remember
what a metaphor or simile is.
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Metaphor - a comparison made by calling one item another item
For example, "the evening of life" or "sunshine of our love"
Simile - a comparison using "like" or "as"
For example, "As snug as a bug in a rug" or "he drinks like a fish"
Personification - to think of or represent an inanimate object as
a person.
For example, "The rocks will cry out his name" or "the moon's face peeked
in my window"
Alliteration - the repetition of the same consonant sounds or different
vowel sounds at the beginning of words or stressed syllables.
For example, "seven silver swans swam" or "even Alice's otter ate the ice-cream"
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- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- Link back to Imagery site
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None as yet..
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SECONDARY
Objective:
4.1 After reading the section on secondary elements and given definitions
of each element, students will identify which secondary element is being defined
in each of five questions.
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Brief definition/description with examples of the five secondary elements
discussed in the lesson followed by a self-checking quiz. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 3 bottom navigation links (Back, Home, Next - "Next" button linked
to assessment page, "Back" button linked to imagery page)
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- Cherry blossom (traditional kigo)
- Matching medium sized cherry blossom bullets to separate the five
secondary elements
- Self-check quiz
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ASSESSMENT
Objectives:
5.1 After completing the Elements of Haiku section and given four
elements of haiku, students will identify which are three major elements
discussed in the lesson.
5.2 After completing the Elements of Haiku section and given the
definition of one of the major elements of haiku students will successfully
identify which element is being described.
5.3 After completing the Elements of Haiku section and given several
examples of my own haiku students will identify which elements discussed in
the lesson are contained in the haiku.
5.4 After completing the complete Elements of Haiku section and
given links to web sites with poems by famous/novice haiku poets students
will select two poems and identify which elements discussed in the lesson
are contained in the haiku they selected.
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The first part of the page consists of four self-check questions. The
second portion of the page reminds students of all the elements discusses,
major and secondary, then gives an example of one of my haiku and how I analyzed
it to see how many of the elements applied to the haiku. Students are then
given a haiku of their own to analyze in a self-check format then told to
search out two haiku to analyze and email their analysis to me. I provide
links to web sites containing haiku to aid in their search. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 3 bottom navigation links (Back, Home, Next - "Next" button linked
to compose page, "Back" button linked to secondary page)
- 8 links to web sites that contain haiku, six with famous Japanese
haiku poets and two by "regular" people
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- Cherry blossom (traditional kigo)
- Self-checking quizzes
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COMPOSE
Objective:
6.1 Using his/her choice of methods of composing haiku, the student
will compose & revise as needed two haiku that at a minimum contain the
three major elements discussed in the lesson. (Secondary elements are optional)
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After a brief review of the writing process students are introduced
to four methods for composing haiku, although they are told they may create
their own method of composing and are given links to other sites about composing
haiku. Next students are reminded to proofread and edit their haiku. As an
example, I show the development of one of my haiku. Finally, students are
given the assignment of composing their own haiku and told when the poem
is due and when it will be posted to the web site. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 3 bottom navigation links (Back, Home, Next - "Next" button linked
to conclusion page, "Back" button linked to assessment page)
- 3 links to other web sites about composing haiku
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- Haiga - picture of old man writing
- Fude brushes as bullets and as symbolizing students are about to write/do
something
- Inkblots as bullets
- 7 step writing process (simple flowchart of my creation)
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CONCLUSION
Objective:
None - the goal of this page is to summarize the lesson and encourage students
to explore haiku further before reading each other's haiku.
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The major concepts discussed
in the lesson (elements, composing techniques) are reviewed and students are
reminded of their original thoughts on haiku to show how much they have learned.
They are encouraged to continue writing haiku and to use what they have learned
to continue to experiment with other forms of haiku as well as other poetic
styles. To help in their continuous study I provide links to other haiku
sites. Students are encouraged to reread each other's introduction
haiku then to move on to the Student Haiku site and read each other's final
haiku. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 3 bottom navigation links (Back, Home, Next - "Next" button linked
to student haiku page, "Back" button linked to compose page)
- 6 links to haiku related web sites
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None as yet..
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STUDENT HAIKU
Objective:
None - the goal of this page is to allow students to share their haiku with
others and read the haiku of their fellow students.
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No text, columns or tables of students' names and haiku. |
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
- 2 bottom navigation links (Back, Home - "Back" button linked to conclusion
page)
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None as yet.
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STUDENT EMAIL
Objective:
None - the purpose of this page is to give students access to each other
via email.
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No text, just a heading and a table with student names and email addresses |
- The email addresses will be links.
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
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None as yet.
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INTRO LETTER
Objective:
None - the purpose of this letter is to tell students how to access the lesson
and encourage them to succeed in the class.
OWCC also has non-enforced mandatory distance learning orientation
meetings so this is also the letter I would hand out to anyone who showed
up for the orientation. And I would have a computer set up to show how to
access the site and ask any questions they may have.
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The letter welcomes the student to the class and encourages them in
their step into the world of lessons on line. It gives my contact information,
the URL of the lesson, the course name and password, the dates of the class,
a picture of both the Netscape and IE browsers, and advice for succeeding
in distance learning. |
- None intended - apart from a return to the lesson web site link - this
not a real web page but a sample of the letter I would mail out to students
to initiate contact for the class.
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
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- None - not a real web page but the letter does contain a screen capture
of the Netscape and IE browser so students will know exactly where to type
in the URL.
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PRINT
Objective:
All previous objectives - the purpose of this site is to give students with
limited access to the internet a chance to print out the lesson in it's entirety
with little graphics to slow printing so they can read and prepare answers
off-line.
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All previous text on one continuous page for printing the lesson out
in its entirety in one session. |
- None intended - not designed to be used as a web page but for printing
- 6 main navigation links (Home, Elements, Compose, Student Page, Student
Email, Teacher Email)
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- Graphic organizers will stay but all pictures for interest/aesthetics
will be removed for easier printing. Standard issue bullets and lines will
replace the fude and cherry blossom bullets and lines.
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